LAUAN504, Weekly 2

30/01/19- Wednesday 

Week Two 

My slide in the Pitch

After the two weeks of the employability workshops, it was time to pitch to the class for 'Life's a Pitch'. What went well in the pitch was receiving the feedback so we could refine the parts in the storyline we were not sure about. My part in the presentation was talking about the backgrounds and demonstrating my ideas for the final pieces through my rough sketches. 

The feedback the group got was based on the complications to do with having an old tomato in our storyline; for the customers buying the tomato sauce, having an old tomato in the animation may put them off of buying the product. 

What didn't go well was the presentation itself. As a group we did not check the presentation before presenting and because it was done on 'Google Docs' it came up on the board overlapping. As well as the presentation itself, the group needed to speak up when presenting so everyone could hear resulting in our group looking unprepared when pitching in a professional matter. 

For the next time I pitch I will make sure I give myself enough time to put my slide together to make it more aesthetically appealing and easier to follow. I will also communicate with my team so the pitch is more effective in a professional environment.